Even for a rough draft, this was still really well done. Better than half the ones that hit the front page ;)
5 for pacing and transition
-1 of it not being completed, but keep up the good work!
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Even for a rough draft, this was still really well done. Better than half the ones that hit the front page ;)
5 for pacing and transition
-1 of it not being completed, but keep up the good work!
Thank you! =)
Well done. I felt that the pace could have been a little bit faster, but otherwise everything was solid. Animation was well done, voice acting was spot, moopsie was adorable, and I was entertained.
Pacing has always been a weakness for me and something I'm trying to improve. This version isn't as bad as the pacing in the original animatic though - that monstrosity was over 12 minutes long and full of WAY too many pointless distractions!
I voice act, and I write. Derp.
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